You think you know me
But I have secrets
Ones, no one can know
No one knows my thoughts,
My desires, my actions
You say you know me better
Than everyone and anyone I know
But you don't and for that you should fell lucky
I'm a bad person
I tried telling someone
All the pleading
Telling me to stop
I HATED it,
It only made it worse
So you won't now
And never will
'cause i am
HIDDEN
A contest entry
- You by Demington.
850 points, ended September 3, 2008, 20 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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Very raw with your emotions, just displaying and telling it like it is has a very large impact for me.
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This poem is very, very rough, both in it's lack of technical polish and emotional content. Honestly I find this stark reality quite appropriate. This poem is oddly appealing in that way.
An unexpected sort of appeal indeed. Well done poet.
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