Dark clouds
Come together
Forming screaming faces
As tormented skies…
Bleed in harmony
To a dirge
Heard in the distance
Gnarled hands
Ending in talons
Squeezing wheezing tissue
As crushed hearts…
Bleed in harmony
To a dirge
Heard in the distance
Colorless exodos*
Concludes this being
Ending living agony
As sliced veins
Bleed in harmony
To a dirge
Heard in the distance
Author notes
Option 1: suicide or cutting
Adora
* exodos: the final scene of a Greek tragedy
A contest entry
- Just Let Me Fade Away.... (Options) by Captain Jenny.
500 points, ended August 27, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a brilliant poem and the use of repatition was great...great write
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Thanks for dropping by.
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very good. thanks for entering
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thank you.
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