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The noble warrior

Grasps his reins
Fixes his helmet
Draws his sword
The noble warrior out to war
A picture of courage
With his firmly set jaws
He holds up his sword
And advances
With his battle cries

He charges with the heart of a horse
Rushes like the hurricane wind
Strikes like an adder's deadly blow
No fear in his heart
No cowardice in his mind

Many are finished at his hands
Many try to finish him
But his skilled hands hold well the shield
And protect him
While the sword lashes out at them

He has no thoughts about what comes next
Attacks,keeps attacking,fiercely
He thinks about winning and winning only
He fights to kill
He fights to succeed

An archer shoots
With deadly aim
Hits the horse,the horse is dead
And the warrior's down
They are satisfied

But an abandoned horse is seized
And the warrior fights
And finished the war
And also himself

The mighty warrior


Author notes

I had two more verses but it got too long.I used the second picture in the contest.

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  • Angelflower
    August 28, 2008

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    Wow.. This was really wonderful! the imagery in here was amazing!! you really did a wonderful job!!! thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck in the contest..


    Angel


  • Slick99
    August 14, 2008
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    wow this is good!!! you should do good in the contest!!! -slick99


  • pop123
    August 14, 2008
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    oops i thought it wasnt longer than 35 lines.Sorry.I should remove it?