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Fall


abandoned-

in the leafless tree
an empty nest




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modern haiku

A contest entry

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  • yukitosumi
    August 14, 2008

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    The form and subject matter mesh very well together. Few words, no leaves, empty nest. This is a nice little haiku. I hope you enter more... and if you already have...I wouldn't know lol
    Best,
    El


  • Nature Song silver member
    August 14, 2008

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    Fall time, desolute...bare and empty fellings of longing! So well written and so few words! As always my friend! Lovely poem ~Sie