She can only fall for so long
Before she hits the ground.
Then she'll vanish into the dark,
Never to be found.
Couldn't you see?
All she ever wanted is you.
She closed her eyes
She pretends to ignore everything you ever do.
You watched her fall,
Why didn't you offer your hand?
She only needed one smile,
And maybe she'd be able to stand.
[You can only keep falling for so long...]
Author notes
Pretty nice picture for the contest!
I may have twisted it a little... I tried to put more of a story into it... enjoy!
A contest entry
- Pic Contest by XxESPNCHICKxX.
600 points, ended October 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Read. Review. Enjoy.
Comments
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Wow!
I really like the flow. The message is perfect. This is an overall wonderful write. If only all of us could understand at the time what is really going on...love can be so blind. I am honored to have read it. Thank you. -
This is a great poem, Lena! Nice emotion, as always!
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This is a good twist to it I liked it!! I think you should do a part two or a sequel and let me read it too. GOOD LUCK and thanks for entering my contest!!
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Thats such a pretty sad poem. I love it!
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