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Seasonal

a seasons strings
plucked by a nymph
pulled into a
euphony
of a silent
melody-
an artisan
inside a
pansophy
of
mini despair
left to
a collapsible
eternity-

Author notes

word bank:
Melody
collapsable
Pansophy
Euphony
Seasons
Dispair
Nymph
Mini
Strings
Silent Artisan

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  • Angelflower
    August 29, 2008

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    You really did a wonderful job.. I like how this doesn't seem forced at all.. it just flowed really smoothly.. I really enjoyed this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • LionessK silver member
    August 18, 2008

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    I like how you did this without a lot of unnecessary words. Few words.. more impact (feeling). Loverly.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 17, 2008

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    i kind of like how you used the words from that list there, to create a very golden poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest