unraveling myself
to reveal the
fire within
piece by piece
word by line,
smoldering colas
ignited by
things often
not left to
shine-
Do they burn
brighter now
that they have
been touched
by fire
or just charred
and ashes left
to drift in
the wind-
Author notes
"Unravelling Fire II" by carts on www.deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Deep Thought PIF by Errant Panther.
610 points, ended August 17, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You have some amazing imagery going in this piece. Congrats on your bronze cup.
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thanks, Panther always has some of the best image prompts, this was a good one,,
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interesting take on this prompt, the remnants of painful memories or the ashes of one's deepest regrets being cats like ashes to the wind.
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woot!
thanks for the bronze... it was a good image,like I said..
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creative and just something amazing you have written here my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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