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gone

"please kiss me"
words whispered

with heartache and pain


breathless purrs long since over


"please want me"
a cry from within my heart

 

strokes from fingers,flutter deeply

now gone cold 


"please need me"
passion faded and un-felt

 

gliding tongues over buds

reduced to nothingness 

 

"please love me"
words unanswered
torn memories only left

 

 

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Crossroads

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    this is so sad, but one that I've felt before. memories from past relationships. these feelings jumped right at me, and as I was reading I felt every word and deeply.

    excellent take on the prompt

    good luck

    kat