simplicity

graceful petals climb

artistic branches complete

flower arrangement

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option #3
haiku
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ikebana of Japanese Rowan

A contest entry

Japanese Poetry by yukitosumi. 700 points, ended August 29, 2008, 25 entries
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penman
August 23, 2008
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excellent
Such an amazing creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest

carole21
August 25, 2008
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thanks for the comments on simplicity . .

apropos
August 14, 2008
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wonderful! so delicately written.

yukitosumi
August 14, 2008
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oh you used the picture I posted! Awesome! I really like the first line a great deal. I almost wish that you had taken that idea further... of petals climbing. I just liked that idea. All the same, it is a nice haiku.
Since I update the image frequently on the page, your link is probably dead. Here is the original. http://regex.info/i/JEF_038853_sm.jpg

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dame de la riviere
August 14, 2008

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Haiku is such an interesting form, to capture an idea in sparse diction makes the choosing all th emore important...nicely done. Best o' luck in the contest. Peace

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