i am...
therefore i love
my heart full as a first kiss
it beats a tempo with my soul
always it grows within me
never skipping a beat
once it has begun
it will always
capture
you
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me some LOVE by Ken-Maverick.
540 points, ended September 6, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites. by She Stole My Voice.
300 points, ended September 21, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 5 by whispernthedark.
660 points, ended September 20, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come! Amazing promts! Plus any Valentines day Poem! (pics. words. ect....) by Lost in a Dreamstar.
605 points, ended April 13, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved the poem! Especially how you mad it into a heart! It must have taken forever! Great poem! Thanks for entering!
~Frosty -
well done with the heart. . .
I likey. Good luck, poet.
♠ Lady Elinor -
Brilliant!
Bravo! A perfect sentiment, given with endering heart.
~ James ~
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I Love this!
This should've gotten a Gold! You are just so brilliant with these shape poems! Truly an artist! Thanks for this. It would make a lovely card theme. You should approach Hallmark or something.
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thanxu
OMG you're like the 3rd person this week to say that about Hallmark 
i wonder how i contact them 
they probably get a jillion poems a week (._.)
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Holy Moly I have done one of these in shape of a Christmas Tree before you did a great job here thanks for sharing much love
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Nice use of title, nice shape to the poem. The theme may not be origional yet the approach is purely unique, this is a stirring and warming poem to read and leaves one with a smile. Very well composed.
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Great shaped poem!
I wrote one with a heart shape last year as a valentine! This one is very good as well as a pleasing shape! Nice work!
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this is cute in that it's in the shape of a heart,
but it is also very generic in terms of imagery and poetic device.
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I love shape poetry, this is so pretty. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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The format is really cute;
I love how you typed it into a heart.
Really cute.
Thank you for entering and good luck ♥
-Rainbow. -
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thanxu i
your nic 
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Very sweet! I love the format of the poem. It adds to the poem and how its almost like you are giving a gift to someone. I think that it makes it all the more special. Great Job! Keep Writing!
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Ah! *heart melting* this is just too divine! I love this muchly
Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this touched my heart and I like the heart shape.
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Awe
This is absolutley beautiful m'dear!!! BEAUTIFUL -
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thanxu
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wow...it's so catchy and unique...^_^
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Whoa. This is awesome! Very well done!
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This is a first,
never seen a poem written in this style
Again, you know what i mean...i need not say
All the best in the comp
Ken -
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strong silent type hugh?
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