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Teller Of Tales

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They called him Captain Ron,
no-one knew if he had ever been to sea
or whether his stories were

just his imagination.

He’d sit on the quayside wall
and reminisce
to all or any who would listen
or give him the time of day

If you gazed into his steel grey eyes
you would see a lifetime
of hardship,
but a spirit undaunted,
defiant -
he was a man with little
but his pride,
his memories,
and his tales of the sea.

Spend an hour in his company
and be enthralled,
as he would have you believe in
mermaids, monsters and mayhem!

and he would always
thank you for listening
and shake your hand warmly
in his rough, weathered hand

but would only accept money
payment for his services

as a teller of tales.
   

 

 

 

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  • carole21
    November 26
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    clever entry . . good take on the prompt . . liked "a spirit undaunted" and "a teller of tales" . . good luck in the contest !!


  • dustytiger gold member
    November 14

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    wow this is a really great read, i can almost see the man as i am reading this, it would be be amazing to hear his stories, you have captured his essence very well, best of luck in the contest

  • Iced Amber Rayn
    September 8

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    the image really assists the reader to picture your character which is really good!
    the stroyline and detail of this poem are amazing.
    thanks for entering.
    -IAR


  • dance for me
    August 25
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    Clever job you did with this. Thank you.

  • AsIThink gold member
    August 16

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    Very nice once again. I can see your talent must be pretty broad. If 'he's' such a great 'story teller' are you his child? You tell a great one yourself. This had a wonderful feel; it almost seemed like I knew who you were talking about.


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    August 16
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    wow, this is cool. good luck in the contest ^^

  • fool no1
    August 15
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    Beautiful background Sue. Excellent piece.Thoroughly enjoyed....mal

  • Very good Ms Sue. You are quite the story teller as well and you do it in such an incredably poetic way. I really enjoyed this one.

  • Bad Bill
    August 15

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    You've brought this salty old sea-dog to vivid life with your well-chosen and atmospheric words, Sue.

    Good one,
    Bill


  • Peter.0 gold member
    August 15
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    terrific write K , I WANT TO TRAVEL TO CORNWALL RIGHT NOW, ..best of luck x


  • Quill
    August 15

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    Although free writes don't rest easy in my mind,i can still appreciate the wonderful imagery and tale told so well within your words Sue,would love to read a rhyme version,there is still a lot for Captain Ron to say.


  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    August 14

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    This is a nice poem. I hope it is a true story. It gives me an idea for making money in my old age.

    Mike


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 14
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    Boffo!

    Good tale well told.
    Love your take on the prompt.


  • arafura
    August 14
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    I like this! A teller of tales is an important person in any community. Like a poet on AP!


  • Musimwa
    August 14

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    Nice

    nice work Mom. Full of imagery. U have told the story to the fullest. Good luck in the contest.

    My love to all


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 14

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    Exactly the tale his face tells Sue! What a stunning piece.. I went inside his world for a little moment. Who knows if the stories are true... yet the joy they give is worth something. I've known men like this!

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