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In the Heart of Observation

metal road and shining reflectors
go about stepping across the stageland
imagined green and mossy path
and beauties spread across a thought

white panes scratched and knuckles bled
the walls in ember, ashes fainted
stagnant censored, burning faces
crying in disorientation

fix the screw, left and space
creating strokes that are doomed to end
it's all on the side, all in the inside
and it's time to tempt the lawmaker

lawmaking in his content
in the pinnacle of happiness
waiting for the law to bend
where he will strike without notice

and in the spirit of routine,
for the sake of assurance
she will drink every bit of its words
and let it melt her to its common core

there, in white overlays
typing midsentence--- a lasting pride of
sweet undeciphered narration

where she can relax in herself.





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yeah.. i don't expect to win anything, but this deals with taking medication and the like. take it however you want.

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  • Salt Therapy
    August 14, 2008

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    there, in white overlays
    typing midsentence--- a lasting pride of
    sweet undeciphered narration

    where she can relax in herself.

    I love this....


    thank you.