soft dance of lips
against supple willing flesh
whilst knowing hands
gently cradle the beacons
of my feminine bosom
nerve endings tremor
at the mingled sensations
of the cool evening air
and warm teasing breath
tracing my spine
heartbeat inflated
to the point where passion
develops into pure
insatiable desire
tearing the shirt
from your back
as though it was nothing
I paint your torso
with lipstick from my kisses
struggling with the satin sheets
trying to peel them away
to move more freely
not willing to surrender
a second of this tender embrace
a quick snap of the fingers
and the lights dim just enough
to reflect the loving mood
and as the climax builds within
I sink my shoulders
deep into the pillows grasp
and listen to the echo
of moans serene
Author notes
Prompt image found on deviantart supplied by contest host, hope you enjoy.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Adult Semi - Quickie 2 !!! by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended August 18, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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congrats on the gold
This is softly sensual without going down that so close to trash road. Nice job.
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thank you for your comments, I am pleased you enjoyed the style and soft sensual images portrayed in this piece.
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Ok this was really really good..Lol. It was heated and yet sensual all rolled into one.. You really did a wonderful job with this.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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WOW
This is incredible
Such a sensual, beautifully written piece tastefully done in beautiful language enticing so softly...I just loved this one...SIgh~
Lynda♥
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I had a feeling you'd drift away with enchantment as you read this, glad you like it and was left with a big sigh
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Sensually attractive, this is beautifully soft and tender as it strokes the page like fingers upon skin ...
Delightful to read
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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thank you my friend, I am glad you enjoyed it.
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This is one of the most beautiful sensual pieces I have ever read. You told such a wonderful story using such elegant words. This was such an enjoyable read. I especially liked the part, "knowing hands gently cradle the beacons of my feminine bosom." Good luck in the contest. I feel this is definetly a winner. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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very nice entry, emotions with tremors wow, good luck
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this is real beautiful, I hope you get something in the contest.
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thank you for those kind sentiments, I am pleased enough to be inspired, any reward is a bonus.
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