In gentle surrender to your sensuality
I come to you my love
a soft blush of anticipation adorns my flesh
as I await the gentle feel of your touch
I can no longer deny the feelings you have
ignited in me, a fire...
a burning desire for you to be one with me
stirs deep within my being
ripple after ripple of nervous excitement washes
over me, breathless, kneeling before you naked
as my body graces yours, soft breasts brush
against hardened chest, hearts palpitating
blue eyes locked on brown for the first time
we smile, cupping your face our lips gently caress
tongues exploring, sucking the fullness of your bottom lip
my hands glide, nails tease, following the outline of your form
my foot rubs against yours, sighing, breathing in the scent of our sex
my body arches as you take me into your arms, eyes closed
your lips follow the line of my spine
calling your name in a muffled hush of passion
my body melts into yours electricity flows
as sensations rush - gripping my stomach
silken cords of pleasure tease my skin, bound in ecstasy
by your touch, you slide in, my hips rise to meet your thrust
as small droplets of sin sate my lips
murmuring, you taste so good
our hands and bodies laced, writhing
we declare the love we share
a soft sigh leaving me as your name
penetrates the night air
Author notes
With Darkest Love baby
your lady xxx
A contest entry
- Breathe Me In. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended August 18, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - erotic lust or making love by Blissfullhatred.
800 points, ended August 24, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my God. This is raw beauty and I love every single inch of this.
Billy's Baby
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So glad you enjoyed..enjoy your honeymoon.
~sugar~
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This is beautiful sis
so sorry Ive been outta pocket for the past week, but I came in for a minute today to show some love
GOOD luck
always,
ephiphany
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Thank you sis for your constant support
Missed you good to see you back
Much Love ~sugar~
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you so much for the silver
All the best for your new start
~sugar~
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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*sigh*
Reminds me of the first night my lady love & I spent together. So romantic, sis. Good one.
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Wonderful feelings Jaime...I hope all is well with you. Always appreciate you reading and commenting.
your sis ~sugar~
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ripple after ripple of nervous excitement washes
over me, breathless, kneeling before you naked
Oh hun those nerves we felt lol!
I love this beautiful sensual dedication
Julie xx
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Thanks hon..so did I LOL! feel the nerves.
Always appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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A GOLD TROPHY WINNER if I'VE EVER SEEN ONE.
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL and OH SO SENSUAL, Sugar! Thanks SO MUCH for giving me the heads up on this one - in more ways than one, Honey! A very juicy piece - to say the least - filled with the fire of desire, tenderness, love, romance, and more. I truly enjoyed it, Baby!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thanks hon for your fab comment
How I am feeling at the moment, the last lines of your comment saying it all. So glad you enjoyed.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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