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His&Her Night

He slowly Turned to see his future that night
Gently he wrapped his love around her
Protecting her innocence
Guarding her until she falls free

Falling free isn't an option tonight
Leaning her head into his chest
Her ears feeling the light beats of his heart
Her heart racing to keep his pace

He slips his arm around her waist
his fingers gliding there way to her
Holding only one rose
Holding only one heart

He has only one love to give
will she accept his rose
his heart
his soul...

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Wow; this was passionately beautiful.
    Loved the emotion & depth unraveling & the lovely imagery. This was a treasure to read.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • movedon
    August 15, 2008

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    Wow Sensual, but not too much. Beautiful! A lot of strong imagery in this! I loved it!! Thanks for sharing this piece.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Pyragus
    August 14, 2008

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    wrapping not rapping. this one was sweeter, but cold and lonely still, at least not evil and crushing. you are quite the poet I didnt notice this before, lol I guess because they werent as... personal as these are. anyways yeah


  • BabyGurlz
    August 14, 2008
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    Tabatha

    then* not the lol i typoed to lol. now i really do feel retarded


    • JBudRos
      August 14, 2008
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      no hey thanks for catching that,
      typo...no ju the completely wrong word

      thanks

  • BabyGurlz
    August 14, 2008
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    Tabatha

    Dont kill me but i think you got a typo. 'wrapped' not rapped. Unless thats how you wanted it the im retarded lol.

    Just thought id let ya know.
    love tabby

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