Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Egyptian Sheets

 


Though I may not be naked,
I feel unwanted eyes upon me -
trying to dig deep into my soul.

 

 

Minutes tick on by,
and time ceases to exist;
a blanket covers my skin.

 

 

Soft, innocent, rare -
these words filter through;
someone has thrown up a shield.

 

 

A fabric so thin,
you can clearly see through -
yet, I can no longer sense the others.

 

 

My love has not deserted me,
but has given me hope in time;
that so long as this sheet stays white
he will always be by my side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

As you can see I choose the first picture.
Under 35 lines.
please credit:Bring_Back_Romance_by_kedralynn

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Angelflower
    August 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You really hoocked me with the title.. and the poem is so beautiful and soft.. bravo. I love the story line here.. it's really sweet and loving!! something that I love!! thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..


    Angel


  • jcat gold member
    August 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    What a beautiful take on the picture....so soft and full of romance!!! Very well done and best wishes


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 14, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Aww protected by love! A beautiful take on the pic sis!!!