a wooden nickel
within skin's injustice
monetarily engaged
in brains beneath
suffering
captivity enraged
liquidity
of molten gold
burnt wood
and campfire notepads
grayed...
significant in wind
A contest entry
- Favorites (Invite Only) by Lj-.
600 points, ended August 29, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like all of the details.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck!
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lol You should go read another Aussie on here who pens quite well when snozzled...Bosun Higgs...I doubt he's been sober when he has penned fantastic and perhaps neither have you lol...keep drinking and hey free booze...Yeah that's a plan
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It's never quite as fun in morn.
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lol Morning would be ordinary but if you could look back and say Damn! Did I write that and be impressed it might be worth feeling lousy for lol..
C
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Fascinating!! Makes me want to know more of the thought behind the images you've penned here... which sound fab.. and again.. fascinating!!
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Thanks and good morning and good night.
I've been drinking all night
and it's after seven am here.
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hehe.. get some sleep!! Sleep well!
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a wooden phucking nickel...brilliant..only you...im diggin all the campfires...the end here is killer...of molten gold--- and on blew me away...yes yes yes...do it again...im stupified grinnin sinking into your words
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I'm actually going to a family reunion party this weekend with all my father's side. Should be quite interesting. Free booze.... weeeeeeeeeeee... lol
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After each break I pause and soak it all in. Burnt wood and campfire.. peaks my senses.
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Thank you for breathing.
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...or stopping to take pause.
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