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The Love We Shared

The love we shared undeniable,
I still feel it for you.
You are irreplacable,
But what can I do.

I'm gonna miss your touch,
And the sound of your voice.
Need you to know I love you so much,
But this is not my choice.

I undertand your confusion,
But it's hard to accept.
I know it's your decision,
And one I must respect.

Still I will love you,
You'll be held in my heart.
I know you're hurting too,
But it's tearing me apart.

You will always be my friend,
If nothing more comes of this.
I know my soul will mend,
But I'll never forget your kiss.

I'll end this now and say goodbye,
For I know you don't wish to hear.
I'll be strong but will not lie,
I'll love you forever my dear.

Author notes

to my ex boyfriend who says he needs time to think...says he loves me but we still might never get back together...it's hard but not so much now..just thought i'd get it out anyways..I love him but won't wait around for someone who doesn't want me.

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  • MxA
    April 26

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    A touching piece. It's hard to let go of the one you love, but sometimes it may be for the best. However, if it's meant to be, they will come back to you. Nice rhyming, flowed very well. Thanks for sharing, nice work.

    MxA

  • ckwriter69
    August 16, 2008

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    This is a sad write, one which we have all been through at one time or another, but it truly does hurt. Thanks for sharing your emotions, and you're right you can't hang on to someone who doesn't want you.


  • written-in-pencil
    August 14, 2008
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    wow.
    this was kinda deep...

    i like et. et was beautiful. sad, but beautiful