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[ I left the apartment in a rage ]

I left the apartment in a rage
slamming the door on my way out
I stopped to her her crying
so innocent she is

It felt like I flew down those stairs
Trudging my way throughout the snow
I know she'll be there
un-expectingly I'll show up
Nock on the door to the fight

It opens
She is as I expected

I grab her
drag her outside
throw her down
she'll get up

I push her down again

you dont deserve me
you deserve this

She walks through the door
baby's crying
she's crying
.....

I see her lying there on the floor
Crying like she never has before
I can feel the pain
it is gently running along her vains

she runs to every corner in the room
no where to run
no room to consume her
no darkness but when she closes her eyes

I know she hurts cause of me
I hurt her too much that day
causing a loss
causing a tragedy

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  • movedon
    August 15, 2008
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    Wow.

    Really scared me...any girl who was once abused would be scared reading this. I'm hoping this is just a write that came to your head....cuz I'm against domestic abuse...But as far as poetry goes, a lot of images in this. Really good work!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


    • Pyragus
      August 17, 2008
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      he was telling the fucking truth and he thinks its ok to write about it, I was that girl and he was that man and its sick I know... I am drowning in it...