Upside-down, I’m falling. Falling.
“Alice?” “Alice?” Someone’s calling.
Is anyone there? “Hello?” “Hello?”
I guess it’s just my own echo.
I’ve finally landed. Where am I now?
How did I get here! How!? How!?
I’ve never been here, if I recall.
So how did I get here? How did I fall?
What now? What now? I sadly debate.
Till I hear a voice. “Late! Late! Late!”
A rabbit! A rabbit! With fluffy white fur!
“Oh, please wait! Sir! Sir!”
The rabbit ignored me, and off he ran.
Leaving behind his gloves and fan.
But the rabbit just hurried. Hurried on.
And before I knew it, the rabbit was gone.
How terribly rude! He didn’t even say hi.
Why did he leave me here? Why!? Why!?
Alone again. What do I do?
Where am I!? Where am I!? I wish I knew
[[nooooooot finnisheddddddddddd]]
Author notes
NOT FINISHEDDDDDDD...
Comments
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so i thnik that it sounds amazing
and if you can finish it
then
i think it will be even more amazing!!!
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I like your take on Alice In Wonderland. It's very creative and the rhyming is done perfectly. ^_^ I cannot wait to read the finished product. :]
-Lily♥
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