Butterfly strokes gliding
effortlessly...
lungs of expansion
breath exhale..
inhales.....
Author notes
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Image inspired Option No 1 ..
10 words only
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest! You Know You Want To? by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended August 14, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I LOVE IT!! FANTABULOUS WRITE!!
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Wow;; a-m-a-zing!
This was so brilliant
for only 10 words you've
penned a masterpiece
and created one heck of an image.
Kudos!! & congrats on gold once again
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Wow;; a-m-a-zing!
This was so brilliant
for only 10 words you've
penned a masterpiece
and created one heck of an image.
Kudos!! & congrats on gold once again
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Reading this made me actually breathe in deeply! What a wonderful poem.
Congrats on the well deserved gold for this.
Slayer
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Oh weird. (the pic I mean). This is a beautiful image you have captured. I absolutely adore swimming and the use of 'breath' in poetry (as many of my friends mock me for *grins*) It is obvious why this won Gold. So well done!
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This is a pretty good poem. It made me think immediately of Michael Phelps. Swimming is awesome and I love watching the olympics. Good job!
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So cool, I'm a swim geek and a diving coach. Too bad we only get to see the height every four years. Well deserved gold, lady.
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congrats on the gold again ! you certainly do have a knack for those quickie contests ! lol another excellent poem :]
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You said it all in just 10 words, Julie!
Congratulations on a very well deserved shiny, gold trophy - and - as always - Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this award winning piece with me! I enjoyed reading it after a very long day at the factory!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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I can see why this won a golden cup sissy. The imagery is wonderfully created.
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Niiiice!..
Put a smile on my face, congrats on the gold,
wonderful,
jin
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That was quick! Hehe
Congrats on the gold hun...well deserved!
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Wow, wierd pic! Stunning 10 words hun, love butterfly strokes. Excellent little piece, good luck in your contest
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Ok....I am sure that you are rooting for your own counrty but all I can say is "Go Phelps!!!! w00t!!!" Sorry your piece got me all fired up about the Olympics!!! Anyhoo.....I love your incredibly abstract take on the pic!! Best wishes
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LOL thats fine hun
I think he is awesome too and hope he continues to do well xx
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very cool take on the pic, nicely done!
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Thank you x
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wow how cool, liked this. good luck
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Many thanks x
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this is a wonderful take on this prompt. I love it a lot.I really love your choice of words
good luck in the contest
kat
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thank you I loved the image xx
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Damn this one is popular! I adore your take on the pic, and loved the wordage...if that's a word....
Well done and good luck
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