Home is where all the masks come off and you feast from a bounty of goodness and joy.
Home is where your bliss is kept tucked into every corner;where your creativity flourishes and your cup overflows with joy.
Home is the place where you eat the bread of happiness in peace.
Home is where you keep your stores of energy.
Home is your comfort zone and your place of repose.
Find your home...it isn't far....
Home, my friend...is where YOU ARE!!!
How does this poem make you feel? What was your general impression?
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Another really nice piece. I'm definitely enjoying reading through your pieces. I've been writing a song about "family" that has similar ideas. When we value and cherish our family, they become everything we could ever imagine and more. Beautiful piece!!
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sweet thought
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...Wow
Nice 8/10 from my perspective.
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Warm Write!
I like the unconventional way you make your sentences to help the flow..Some would say break it up, perhaps in this one it is better to keep them long! Wonderful flow,rhyme and sentiment here and very true! Lovely write!
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Thank you for the great review! Really nice to feel appreciated! Read the newest! Broken Stone
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This is most definitely a feel good piece, and you most certainly express your view clearly and sincerely. Makes a change sometimes to read an uplifting work. Thanks for sharing. Cheers
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Your review made my day
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This is great! Home is definitely
where you are deep within your heart.
I love the way that you put this one
together! Thanks a lot for sending
it my way!
Jeremy0826
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