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We are soon to be with out a home
For the hubby problems, wife doesn't condone
My son & I, Mother & her girls
I know, as I pick up my comb

Face my fears, for they are few
But I must think of my son, too
I look around the big, scary world
And think, 'What will we do?'

My life has taken many turns
So many bridges I have yet to burn
As the Red, White, & Blue unfurls
Friend from foe I must now discern

Face my fears, for they are few
But I must think of my son, too
I look around the big, scary world
And think, 'What will we do?'

So many questions are in my mind
Such scary thoughts, even in light
My many thoughts, they swirl
I can hardly go to sleep at night

Face my fears, for they are few
But I must think of my son, too
I look around the big, scary world
And think, 'What will we do?'

In God's arms I find rest
For He has provided me with the best
Friends so true, one guy, one girl
I look at my son & know I am blessed

Face my fears, for they are few
But I must think of my son, too
I look around the big, scary world
And think, 'What will He do?'

Author notes

This is about what I'm going through now. I'll be homeless after tomorrow. I'm scared more than I have told anyone, including my Annie Bananie & my Coffee Bean. I only ask for much prayer & many thoughts. Should anyone actually be able to help, send a message to:

Ann: www.allpoetry.com/annXmarieXcampbell
Dusty: www.allpoetry.com/Sadistik

I won't be able to comment back immediately, but anyone who comments, I WILL return it asap.

Thank you for your love & support & prayers.

It's sort of a song...I guess.

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  • PureCountry
    October 26, 2008

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    Bright Cheetah,

    be encouraged. When one taks a step on principle through faith and knowledge the Great Spirit honors that commitment. He will tend to your every need and speak to you in His own way, if you will but listen.
    Yes there is a way to harness and begin to readily receive that voice, to understand it more.
    I commend you for your boldness of action and will pray earnestly for you and yours.


    • SunDew
      November 1, 2008
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      silent hawk

      I appreciate that more than words can say.

      A deep Niaish, my friend,
      ~Bright


  • LittleMoon silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    I really feel for you, I was once where you are but it will pass. You may not see a way now but it will come and you will be stronger for it. All words that mean nothing when you are frightened for your child and yourself but honestly, all things pass. Never underestimate the power of prayer. Blessings be with you while you are in need.


    • SunDew
      October 2, 2008
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      littlemoon

      True. I have found a place to live until I can find a place of my own. I am with family & friends & church people. I have also been able to start an at home business which I believe will truly work, since it's about helping people. Thank you for your words of kindness. I've had many blessings just since writing this poem.

      Thanks for your kindness,
      ~Bright


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    A Prayer

    and your fear will be answered. God Bless and take care. Peace, Cyn


  • Dark Otter
    September 8, 2008
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    Good luck!

    May you be watched over.


  • trekkergirl
    August 30, 2008

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    I am truly sorry for your troubles. I hope you overcome them soon. And may your life be a happy and safe one soon.

    • SunDew
      August 31, 2008
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      trekkergirl

      Niaish for the kind support.

      ~Bright


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 18, 2008

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    Heart wrenching and i pray that you find comfort and peace from your sad situation. Im sure i can speak for everyone hear when i say that our thoughts are only a heartbeat away from you and our prayers are with you always

    • SunDew
      August 18, 2008
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      gd66uk

      I thank you, my new friend, from the depths of my heart.


      ~Bright

  • SoulWhispher
    August 15, 2008

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    May the spirit walk with you
    In this scary time of life

    When it seems the world is darkest
    And pain cuts like a knife

    I will pray to all the gods
    Where ever they may be

    May the answers soon find you
    And set your worst fears free


    I hope you find a path from the pain you are going through, Blessings John


    • SunDew
      August 15, 2008
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      john

      Niaish for your prayers, my friend! The support I'm getting is really helping me face this head on, instead of feeling sorry for myself. I'm trying to steady my thoughts, my self, so I can do whatever is best for my son & I. I feel like I have so much support here, & thank you for providing some.


      ~Bright


  • UnManned4Ever
    August 14, 2008

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    Awww! Michelle! I done told ya when i get to MD. i am going to speak to Harold and see if you can live with us. I am so sorry this has gotten this ugly! I love ya girl!


    • SunDew
      August 14, 2008
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      sissy

      And if the answer is no, I have no other place to go. I love you, too. Expect messages for me from others, btw.


  • Shakes-spear
    August 14, 2008

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    This is sad!

    I feel your sorrow for I have been there and see it on the horizon for me as well. If this is a home that ie being forclosed on...go to the bank and talk to them, they will make a deal as they can't use it iether. I will pray for you and you will be in my thoughts. Good luck, The Shaker


    • SunDew
      August 14, 2008
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      uncle shaker

      That would help if I had a job. But I am scared to put Dewey in daycare (all the horror stories, especially since he can't speak!), so no job for me. I appreciate the suggestion, though, & will certainly do so once I have work.


      ~Bright


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 14, 2008

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    With open arms I do welcome you my home is always your home

    Your words of pain and need flow like a song and softly break my heart...sweetheart, you are never alone My prayers and thoughts will hold you and if there is anything I can do to help please please let me know as i said~ my home is yours if needed


    • SunDew
      August 14, 2008
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      sweet sis!

      It may well be needed, if I can't move in with my best friend. Please let her know where you live by clicking the above link. She will be my eyes, ears, & voice while I'm unable to be on AP.

      I can never say niaish enough.
      ~Bright

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