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the leaves are beginning to change color

if there was a way to tell you
every moment, every memory
without you
only widens the hole,
the gap in my heart

but every second
every time
you were there
but could never really be
the blood only empties further

every beat,
my pulse,
empties me
further

every drop
spilling at your feet

but i've been stitched up
by an amazing doctor
a surgeon of love;
change

just when the stitches
are healed
they get ripped out
again
and again
by one fleeting
moment

but no moment
will erase all the ones
before and after
cardiac arrest

a new beginning
a sad ending
a twist of perspective
and growing apart

the seasons are changing
in my heart

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  • xbruisedxhuesx
    November 7, 2008

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    just when the stitches
    are healed
    they get ripped out
    again



    in the end, it seems life in relationships get torn apart... every time you think things are fixed, think things are finally done with, the wound opens, or is opened again, and again.. .sometimes with a knife, or nails or simply wear and tear in the situation...



    beautiful, such great imagry, i can see it in two ways- one as a literal and one in the aspect of what one would think the metaphores are meant to be representing.


    • facelessxfacade
      November 7, 2008
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      Without the scars, without the wounds; we would never know love, hope, change, or trust.


  • tragicallyGifted
    August 14, 2008

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    Inspiring, in such a sad way:

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4512249


    You've written it well, though.