My insides are burning,
My heart, how it screams.
The little things that you do,
Take their toll on me.
Wishing and dreaming of the day,
When your eyes finally open wide,
To see the scars you have left,
And the tears you made me cry.
So selfish of you to lie to me so,
To say you're in this forever.
And worst of all, I believed you,
When I should've known better.
Got to cut myself loose from everything,
Got to burn the bridges leading to you.
Got to rid my heart of some suffering,
Got to distance myself from all the things you do.
My insides don't burn quite so brightly,
My heart, a faint but persistent echo.
Only I can hear it yearning for you,
Just you and I, but no one else knows.
Author notes
I'm getting back into my writing, slowly but surely. Hopefully this isn't too bad. =D
written August 12, 2008
Comments and Thoughts Please! ^_^
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Got to burn the bridges leading to you
VERY vivid imagery here! This is really well done, and I'm glad I stopped by to check out some of your stuff. Keep up the great work! :-D
~Robby~
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I totally hate you!!
Naw im juss playin.. but sumone sounds angry! This seems like something I would write.. but its very great and u are really gettin back into your writin.. i love your choice of words.. i like all the lines that i dont even have a favorite line. i lobe the whole poem its self. GREAT WORK babe. love yah.
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