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Passionate Twists of Pleasure

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Within the air beads of moisture linger
and each gust fulfills me with such passion.
Sweet scent of lavender graced my finger
as nails trail your skin with heated fashion.

Emotions spin wild, out of  my control
and your eyes link mine, drawing me on out.
Within your embrace I can feel your soul,
then my heart beats fast & heat flows about.

Your breath upon my neck  enticing me,
bodies pushed closer together by love.
Sensations of pleasure exploding free,
spreading like raindrops sent from up above.

We're the clay of passion, ready to mold,
between your hands and my flesh, heat unfolds.

Heat
between
us grows with,
sweet touching, soft
hands explores warm flesh.
Mouths are hungry, thoughts wild,
lips kiss thighs, hands stroke groin, heat
soars from limb to limb, warmth screams YES.
Mold close, form must hold our trance through out.
Moans brought forth held passion, loves fires run deep.

Petals
spreading wider,
lovers entwine as one.
Passion claims hearts of two.
Satins sheets drenched by our lust,
bodies needing releasing quick.
Wrapping in tight embrace
tongue tastes of her
Petals.




Please come to me, my skins calling  you.
Upon the sheets you lay me down sweetly
and with great pleasure you'll drink  passions dew.

Your hands travel a lace teddy in blue,
from breasts to stomach your hands roam freely.
Please come to me, my skins calling you.

Sweet whispers escape your lips, I moan too,
your breath touching  places, foreign to me,
and with great pleasure you'll drink passions dew.

Spreading pink petals, you know what to do,
slide your tongue into the forbidden sea.
Please come to me, my skins calling you.

Heart beats in rhythm, our passion brand new,
alive we are in loves soft harmony,
and with great pleasure you'll drink passions dew.

So as the dew tops the petals, we knew,
that all passions will be fed completely.
Please come to me, my skins calling you,
and with great pleasure you'll drink passions dew.

Author notes

Sonnet

A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg
#2) abba cddc effe gg
#3) abba abba cdcd cd

A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.

Etheree

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with
more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count.

RICTAMETER
A rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and last lines are the same with the syllable count as follows:

line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9
line 2 - 4 syllables
line 3 - 6 syllables
line 4 - 8 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables
line 6 - 8 syllables
line 7 - 6 syllables
line 8 - 4 syllables
line 9 - 2 syllables - same as line 1


Villanelle
A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme:
aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the
poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).


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  • Poetryintheblood
    August 15, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautifully spoken and sensual entry, and may I add WOW, this is sheer perfection in every manner, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    Beautiul poetry, superbly to form, clever as all **** and hotter'n'hell.

    Is there more can be said?


  • Cannonsfire
    August 13, 2008

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    Damn fine work here and may I say 'hot as hell' Now i am looking for my Dan lol where'd he go again


  • Griswold silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    Wonderfully done blending of forms my love. And an ever so Hot write doing it. I do love to mix it up a bit myself occasionally.. Love you baby...Scott


  • moluv10
    August 13, 2008

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    WOW! This is hot and steamy! you used several different forms too. I love it! Best of luck in the contest.


  • HisDirtyLiLPoet
    August 13, 2008

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    WoW! With finger between my lips -- (My mouth you pervs lol) I must admit this had me twitching in my seat --

    Give me your mailing address and I'll mail you my damn blue teddy!

    ... what can one say ...

    Hellz yeah,
    She-ra

  • Volfeng
    August 13, 2008

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    Wow, This is over the top wild! The Forms are amazing, Especially, the vanilla ring dings, I'm speechless!! but the poem itself I am even more speechless, I need a fire extinguisher!! Breathtaking, I Love You,

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