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Genesis, Draft 1

In the Beginning
God created the Heavens and the Earth
And He saw that it was good

So forth starts a story whence
Nothing becomes, nothing forgets
A dream of fallacies, so true
Of whores and angels, demons too

Noah, oh father of all men who breath
Adam, oh child of our God, amen
Cain, you putrid man of the Serpent
Snake, you demon, corrupter of them

And let the children breath for the sanity
With water droplets, new land and humanity
The heavens above should come to shine on us all
And the Father will judge with love when we fall

Demon snake, your story begins
This one chapter of Genesis
And when The Holy Father
The Son
The Spirit
Are through with your chapter

We shall all see
Why it was good

Author notes

Just a quick, rough, dirty, piece-of-crap mind-stream of an idea I had earlier, but cannot come to remember for its fruition. x.x

I'll work on it.

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