silken lilies bloom
like the flush upon your cheek
after our first kiss
Author notes
can sleep, to much poetry in my head, this contest is helping me get it out
A contest entry
- PIF contest: Picture~Inspired by Night Hope.
1500 points, ended August 31, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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First of all, let me thank you for your entry into my contest. I appreciate the time & effort that you spent on your poem immensely, because I completely recognize & understand the symptoms as being my own, as well. lol
Also, please let me apologize & ask for your understanding this somewhat generic comment; I have a migraine & need to get this contest judged so I can get to bed. I don't have a lot of time or energy to be online these days. Which is partly why I'm commenting at 3 am.
This is the part that I liked the most:
"silken lilies bloom"
There is a lot of tenderness contained within this small penning. I thank you sincerely for sharing this part of your Self with the rest of us lost, angelic souls...Keep writing...This world needs all the Poets & Scribes it can hold. Especially now.
Be good to yourself & those around you; it really does matter, as you know.
~ Wanda
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sweet and beautiful !
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Breathtaking. Such maturity. It's beautiful, different context for a haiku but lovely.
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beautiful ... "like the flush upon your cheek" is a very visual image. Creamy soft skin with just a tinge of pink...a blush. Nice job
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