My darling, my love, my very own
Breathe into my ear
Let me feel your warm breath
As you hold me oh so near
Your lips, your eyes, your curly hair
Just wrap around my heart
When you take me in your arms
I all but fall apart
I tremble at your very touch
Your warm breath sends me flying
I am on top of a cloud
You do this without even trying
So my darling breathe me in
Caress me so tenderly
Kiss me and touch me my very own
Breathe new life into me
A contest entry
- Breathe Me In. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended August 18, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This is awesome and so romantic!
It's such a wonderful feeling when you find
someone that makes you feel like this without
them even trying. It goes to show you just
how much chemistry and passion flows between
the couple. I love the imagery and sincerity
in this write. I am sure that you will do
well with this one! Good luck to you my
friend and keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you Jeremy. Your wonderful comments are always a joy to read. Thank you my friend....Katie
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Ahh sweet poem. It's nice to have the sort of relationship reaffirmed in physicality. Hope you do well in the contest.
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Thank you Seven Kinky. Your comment is very much appreciated...Katie
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This is very beautiful piece and I enjoyed the read....God Blessnovy
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Thanks novy...
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