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A Dark Romance

The glow of whirlwind sunshine days
Burning wintry moonlight nights
Silky rays of pale moon that
Dip and flow across the Earth.

Gentle now, gentle sweetheart
Keep your mind where I want it to be
Get your thoughts out of my head
And your lips caressing mine.

Even as the world falls apart
Between our hopes and shattered dreams,
Always the moonlight will allow
Us to be together.

I want what I shouldn’t have
To keep the one who has these problems
The sun can’t shine upon him
Thoughts are scorning him

I need those hands to stroke my hair
To rub my back
To dry my tears

They said I wasn’t good enough
To belong to him.
But not to him, but not to him.

I’m a slave to this forbidden love,
To every midnight meeting
Basking in flowing moonlight

I’m in love with that rush
He is. With that hope he isn’t
At quite yet.

Romance like the darkened sky
Fading into tomorrow, fading
Into what isn’t there quite yet.
Until times change again.

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  • Climax
    August 19, 2008

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    Interesting.

    Emotions are not easily told...
    As in here none of it was sold.

    Your job has been done pretty well...
    Just by the title one can tell.


  • DreamerOfTheStars
    August 14, 2008
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    It was pretty well written but you went against some of the contest rules... you use capital letters and there is no rhyme in this... although I like it the way it is... if you are expecting to get a trophy I'd revise it and follow the rules better next time...
    always~Steph