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Warrior

Dripping grins of grim faced ghouls
They are hideous in their strength
sweetend drops of blood cling to them
They are the m'ash'narqui

The summoning brings a quick response
And a tiny beast of black and shine
He fights as a frightful warrior
chasing off the silly beasts
who thought they could enter
in our domain

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  • Romeo Dragonheart
    August 26, 2008

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    Creative, I loved the way you create imagery and get straight to the point. Your works are well written.
    Later
    Romeo


  • The Tower
    August 14, 2008

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    A smaller part of a larger story? Is "m'ash'narqui" a reference to something or is it of your own creation?