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The Collapse

Missing image

collapsable heartbeats
trace the outline
of fluttering forgiveness

seasons of despair
give way to strings
dangling from nymph fingers
stiff  and true

billboard beauty
unrectified
loves promises
leak from weakened lips


Author notes

pic prompt

word bank

WORD BANK (use at least 4 words from the word bnk please.)
Melody

collapsable

Pansophy

Euphony

Seasons

Dispair

Nymph

Mini

Strings

Silent Artisan

concentrate

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  • Angelflower
    August 29, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job.. I really love the way you combined the picture prompt and the word bank.. It flowed smoothly.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • apples fell
    August 13, 2008
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    Quite lovely.