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Muse, Missing In Action

I don't know if she's lost it,
Or she's merely suffering a (yellow!) moment,
But I know that muse is what she lost,
At least that's what she says.

To me, poetic talent is always there,
Just dormant, waiting,
for the time to be picked up again,
And Jackie, there is yours.

It isn't gone, merely waiting for you,
To take it up again on both shoulders,
You are the Atlas of poetic form,
Great weight shouldn't bring you down.

Your creative talent outweighs the rest,
An even balancing dish,
Missing in Action is not the truth,
That muse merely waits for you.

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Dedicated to Jackie (Kiwigirljacks) who seems to have lost her muse...

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    I meant to say I noticed that "yellow" moment bit on there!!!! hehehe

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Awww thanks hun!! I'm so glad I popped on this morning.. and saw this! You are really sweet!

    My muse is a tempermental little cow at times!! I hope she comes back properly soon and stops running off being a tart lol

    You're too kind about my writing here though! But I'm pleased you feel that way!

    Thank you soooooooo much for this! Gave me a big

    This.. and you... are going on my family & friends page!!



    Love ya!