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Octupus Scar

Burn,
Great tentacle scar that mars my face,
Caused by octupus cooking in the kitchen,
Has deformed me for all time.

I dive into the water to null the pain,
But that evil scar will always remain.

I'm stuck, what can I say,
I shouldn't have stood over the pot that day.

A contest entry

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  • And Hyetal
    August 14, 2008

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    Interesting write. I like the rhyming bits, made the whole thing unique.

    Thank you for entering!

    ~Cassie

  • piccola silver member
    August 13, 2008
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  • charcoal
    August 13, 2008
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    great last line