she daydreamed of the abysmal sea
through those forgotten, hooded eyes,
that matched the shade of violent undertows
shrouded in her docile glances;
as monsters linger in the deep.
the Kraken wakes.
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wow so much said and worthy of gold
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you are amazing, girl! what powerful imagery and emotion. yep, just amazing!
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it's a beautiful poem
"that matched the shade of violent undertows" I love this line
it's a very well written poem
a delight to read
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Sea monsters are awesome and so is this poem.
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At first I was kind of like 'eh, I can see why Chelsea hates it', but the ending... WOW. I love your last line. That totally brought the whole poem up for me.
I loved it loved it loved it.
~Cassie
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