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dewdrops at dawn

dewdrops at dawn
sparkle in rising sun
worms squirm

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  • Papers
    August 13, 2008

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    I love the morning hours! This depicts the perfect image of the morning to any of it's lovers. Very well written and good luck!


  • yukitosumi
    August 13, 2008

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    This is a very well written haiku, as I understand them, which is to create a setting and then an action or some sort of statement. At first, with the first couple of lines, I was thinking, "Oh great--a dew drops at dawn haiku--never get tired of those" but I feel like the last line made it unique, and very in the spirit of Japanese poetry. Simple beauty in one moment. Well-done. I hope you consider entering again! Actually you might have already... but I wouldn't know since I can't see any of your names
    Best wishes,
    El


  • Solidified
    August 13, 2008
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    I's like me some haiku.

    this one brings the environment into focus very clearly.