My lyrics have the impression of a meteor shower...
Perfectively written and never sour...
And of course also contains great power.
I am very observe...
I can make you think things you've never heard...
I'm great poetry and show it in all my words.
My soul is like the full moon over the sea...
As I write poetry I let it free...
And just maybe.
I have the heart of a poet...
And as sensitive as any man can get...
Even make all your troubles forget.
My words can be warm or cold...
I can make your emotions shift and this I know...
Very sorry but my skills you may not borrow.
My words can even be...
As powerful as the wind that can take down a tree...
Or calmly hold it in a cool breeze.
And finally...
You have met me...
The master of poetry.
So read, listen and learn my pet...
To the simple message I just sent...
I was born with the heart of a poet.
A contest entry
- Poetic Masters by Climax.
1600 points, ended August 31, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is an example for all of you on my contest. Will not be judged. (^.^)
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''I was born with the heart of a poet''. That's about you.
I swear that I wrote you the poem ''Poetic World'', that I sent you before that I read this one. I hope you believe me. I write about you, not about myself.
The ideas ''fly'' in the air. It's not always stolen I must say again
I like the poem.
Karina
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I believe you dear...
Just like you believe in my poetry.
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My soul is like the full moon over the sea...
As I write poetry I let it free..I love these lines. Your work is really good! Love the rhyming! -
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Thanks! Read on!
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i guess you were born with the heart of a poet and you're damn lucky you got a great talent out of it. i love the rhyme sceame and the heartfelt words you have used keep up the wonderful writing
~Amy
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Always will dear... As long as I have friends like you!
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I love this:
I have the heart of a poet...
And as sensitive as any man can get...
Even make all your troubles forget.
Great job on this!!
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Kick @$$!
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LOL, ur welcome!
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"my soul is like the full moon over the ocean..."
that is a very beautiful line.
although, the second stanza, first line, "I am very observe" doesn't sound right...grammatically. How about, "I am your poetic nerve" it rhymes
hmmmmm, maybe we can go steady....
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You know that what observe means baby girl?
*LOL@Baby Girl!*
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wow amazing poem i like it alot
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Excellent!
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Young and brilliant! But I sense a deep sensibility in this write.
Summer
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Thank you dear! Feel free to read others of my poems!
Love you lots!
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Beautiful imagery...I enjoyed your metaphores...The heart of poet is one that is forsaken by all other means of life...for from words of brilliance...there can only lie the deepest emotion...
-Victoria
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So very true hun... You are a smart one!
Best comment I've read!
Thanks dear!
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That was great. How do you get so creative with your rhyming, I'm jealous I think my favorite was the last stanza for some odd reason. Anyways...amazing! =]
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Thank you. You are invited to read for of mine if you like.
Love you lots!
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woah......
this is awesome!
so yes,
that does make you awesome.
feel free to brag if you want to.
keep writing...I LUVVS THIS POEM, lol..
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I luws you as much as you luws my poems!
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man that was awesome....truly you have me speechless and i used all my complimenting words on your other poems......WOOHOO AWESOME POEM!!!!!! ok one more left....of course keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love ya,
M
R
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Aways comes standard with me love!
Love you mores!!!
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Hello darlin!
This is a beautiful piece! Your words are true and very deep. Twas very enjoyable to read! I loved the first stanza.
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Love you dears!
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