Do you ever feel like crying?
Like the world’s always against you?
Like when you pour your Heart out it goes strait down the drain?
Like nothing you do is ever good enough?
I do…
Do you ever feel like just breaking down in front of every one?
Like no one knows who you really are?
Like if they did know it would crush their world?
I do…
I guess what I’m asking is…
…Is there anyone out there like me?
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ya im just like u
this poem is me
i feel like doing all those things all the time
i can so relate
i love this poem -
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Thank you for reading...
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Great poem.
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The darkness is my friend. It blankets my emotions and allows me to be oblivious. I like this write however.
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great ^.^
omg yes!!! i luv ur poem its fuckn awesome -
oh it made me cry. i felt like this many times before this poem is filled with such emotion, such sadness... it took my breath away.
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I'll be very frank here. I found nothing appealing.
Although I did find the lines :
Like no one knows who you really are?
Like if they did know it would crush their world?
interesting.
I could see no imagery, no metaphor, no play or words.
Not even an attempt to get a flow going.
This could have been a simple diary entry. treat this as a sketch and create something really poetic. -
so short but so inense.. I feel this way now. so far my fav
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So true
i have felt like this on many occasions... sometimes your poetry just hits home for the both of us doesn't it. good job keep up the good work. Akari
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Thanks...
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Sure, I think we all have our moments like that. The question you gotta ask yourself is this one: is it worth it? Sometimes you just gotta reach out and choke the life out of what's bothering you. Make changes, do things that make you happy. It's all about doing for you, right? Lovely write.
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Thank you It means alot
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