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Interrupted

In the inkiness of our bedroom
Our hearts and bodies meet
Our ears are half cocked
Listening for sounds of little feet
There is no audible sound
Except the rustling of the sheet

Stolen moments, we have few
Except in dead of night
Interrupted liasons by a little boy
Are our endless plight
But we checked and checked and checked tonight
And he was tucked in tight

Our rendezvous continues
At a comfortable pace
We are enjoying
Invading one another's space
When suddenly I look up
And spy a little face

He smiles and innocently asks
Why is daddy squishing you?
Thus ends our night of marital bliss
thwarted again by you-know-who

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Humm..yes you have stated the one aspect and that is really interesting sometimes.....I love it..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done...


  • Seven Kinky
    August 13, 2008

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    HAHAHA!! Oh man...this makes me REALLY glad I don't have kids. Such an interesting and cute write. Good luck in the contest.