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Can Dreams Come True (Song)

[Verse 1]
Does he hear my laugh
Or my song
I've been right here all along
Can he see
When I pass
Is it possible, will it even last

[Chorus]
I can't tell if I'm invisible
Does he see that I am here at all
Can dreams come true
If love is overdue
In everything we do

[Verse 2]
Can he feel the love
In my gaze
He amazes me every day
I can see his face
In my mind
And in my heart, it is him I find

[Chorus]
I can't tell how he feels about me
I just hope that someday he will see
Can dreams come true
If love is overdue
In everything we do

[Bridge]
I've never
Loved another
And there's no one
I would rather
I just can't leave
If I believe
There's a chance
For us to dance

[Chorus]
I can't tell how he feels about me
I just hope that someday he will see
Can dreams come true
If love is overdue
In everything we do

[Fade out...]

Author notes

I really like this song. I don't often write them... and usually they're from how I feel at the moment. But this? Nope. This one is unique because, for once, I'm not writing from experience.

The melody is meant to be slower, more heartfelt, and rather quiet.

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 17, 2008
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    i think this is a strong and moving song you have written here my friend, keep it flowing.