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Terror

Through endless nightmares dark deeds are done
Where illicit dreams of shameful evil comes.
They contaminate our minds with images so profound
That cloud our judgement and give vent to our silent sounds.
We yearn for release, a mere moment of respite
But the evil of darkness will not let you wake tonight.
The sleep of the just is no longer for us
We crave the depravity, the nightmare of lust.
So bring us no light, so that we may not wake
Let us just revel in dreams that our imagination make.
You cannot save us, so don't even try
For our evil is such it will make you cry.

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  • ArchOblivion
    September 7, 2008

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    Very dark and fantastical fantasy perspective. Short but profound, thanks for your entry and good luck to you.


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    This is greatly penned. The flow and the creativity pops out and its inevitable to observe. But, you have missed out my rules darling and I guess I would understand which prompt you chose if you would kindly enough put the option in your author notes.
    thank you!


  • XScreamMeALoveSongx
    August 28, 2008
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    I like this one alot...great write!!!!!! =]


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Ahh..this is really an honest and true emotion you have described while introducing the self..well done my friend...

  • darkmindedfreak
    August 13, 2008
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    this is a good poem!

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