Warm Receiver

Hands place promise
soft against flame
as wick drips of kerosene

Premeditated gyrations
soothe with thrust
to inflame sweet ache

Pressure purges
bones of barrenness
by harvest of dreams

Bottom brushes carpet
in flurries of friction
as purpose causes stream

Author notes

"Crossroads"

A contest entry

Adult Semi - Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience. 1350 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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poetsruletheworld
March 10
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woohooo...erotically vivid...nuff said...
Sweet Impatience
August 16, 2008

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My Oh My... I must say you have a way with your words.. Oh most definitely. very steamy, hot.. I particularly love the first stanza and the last.

hmm I wonder who you were thinking of huh? I know.

beautiful poem, Excellent take on the prompt

good luck

kat
Heavenly Angel
August 14, 2008

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Wow!
This is extra sultry and steamy!
Makes me think of someone in particular
Nice and warmly enticing, my friend
The best of luck to you in this contest!
- Cerulean Sunrise
  August 14, 2008
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  Really who?? You don't have to say. hehe
MysticalRayne
August 14, 2008

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Excellently written with taste ~ love it ~ best of luck in the contest
Dalaney
August 13, 2008

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you know what? you are reallllly good at sensual writes. I'm giving you a triple 'wow' for that last stanza - bookmarking this one. Love, Lane
Cannonsfire
August 13, 2008

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Damn bro, you write sensually hot so well and so subtle but I still shivered with the imagery. Love, C
kiwigirljacks
August 13, 2008

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Very saucy!! Love the images you create bro with your amazing word choices!! Woot!!
PassionsPromise
August 13, 2008

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O Indeed what a image you painted hon
Great job and best wishes to you.

Love
Passions