Pale light filters through curtains drawn
muting the dark colors of the coming dawn.
We hold each other in the absent light;
our senses heightened, we find dark delight.
Hands following curves, we proceed by feel.
Lips find new tastes. The darkness reveals
pleasures unnoticed when guided by the eyes.
Now each movement is guided by our sighs.
Clothing scattered, I feel your lips by my knees.
As you take me in your mouth, ignoring my pleas,
only the sensations of your passion now exist;
hands pull me forward and I can’t resist.
We sink to the floor and I move you above me.
The perfume of your passion pulls me, hauntingly,
until my mouth and tongue find you, softness in the night,
and as I return the pleasure, you continue to excite.
Without illumination, time has lost its meaning
and we simply are, in the dark careening,
only pleasure taken, only pleasure given,
as toward our final goal we are both driven.
Sensations overtake us and we find ecstasy.
Lying there together, I pull you next to me,
and as our lips touch in the dimness, we find
that even in the darkness, love is never blind.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.deviantart.com
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A contest entry
- Adult Semi - Quickie!!! by K a t.
1350 points, ended August 17, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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'and we simply are'
Best line you've ever used in one of your erotic writes. Love it.
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Wow.. very very sexy! Love the sights and sounds and touches of this.. it's all very tactile! A beautifully dark erotic piece, with a divine ending!!!
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this is beautiful in every sense of the word. I truly love this poem in many ways on many levels. each word penned from your heart. sensual, loving with intimacy also. you're right love isn't blind. such passion between brought forth here.
beautiful take on the prompt, and your poem is brilliant.
this brings a smile to me and warms my heart.
good luck in the contest
kat
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And this one
hehe
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