I was out skipping rope
You spies took my rope away
They said I had to hop
Or into to jail I'd stay
I said take me to the King
It's his kingdom you see
If the king says Ok
Then he will set me free
Author notes
Katie Lazette
A contest entry
- The King's Throne! by Bionic Poet.
450 points, ended August 31, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Haha, great job with this first part as well as the second part of this story. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks Topnotchsy, glad you liked my poem..Katie
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beg for mercy,beg for the King
let them them getaway with any thing. They can't rule over girls thist way. tHE kING WILL MAKE THEM CRY, saying sisst boys make girls cry,
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Thanks for your input, I appreciated your opinion. Now I need to see what else I have to do in this contest.
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Now you may think,
It is the strangest of things.
Because in my land,
You must jump rope with strings!
But I'll let you live,
I'll let it pass.
Cause when my spies saw you jumping,
They said, "wow she jumps fast!" -
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Well I tried to jump
Just using strings
But it didn't work
So instead I'll sing
Thanks for letting me live
You said you'd let it pass
I'm sending you a big kiss
Cause I'm that kind of a lass
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LOL. You did a wonderful job with this!! It has wit and humor as well as perfect rhyme. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks daviscth, glad you enjoyed it. Now I have to see what else I need to do for the contest.
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