mixing colors
of our flames.
Orange:
your desires,
my enthusiasm.
Yellow:
our friendship
turning into more.
Red:
my love and
your passion.
burning our
woods of life.
leaving only
Black death.
blended with
White purity.
Author notes
Raeven Rocks ~
First off...it probably doesn't completely pertain to the prompt of the contest because its not really discrete about a certain rose I would be if I could be one...but idk to me it just seemed like it could fit because of the love, rose, relationship metaphor....^^"""
Well the colors are of the flames yet their descriptions are those meanings of those colored roses...and well that kinda gives off the metaphor of it. Anyway, I hope you liked this piece ^^ Please leave your opinions below. Thankies ^^
A contest entry
- A Love Story With A Twist by Venus25.
425 points, ended September 16, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If I were a rose by Patched Up Ragdoll.
400 points, ended February 4, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A clever poem..... I would never think to write about the colours and the meaning behind a flame!
Well done
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Personally, I really liked the way you wrote this, explaining each color of the flame and it's meaning .
Very well done
Raker
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Beautiful for any relationship, nice piece...
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i like the colour theme in the poem abd its a really good poem
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oh this is very nice, for what ever reason all is lovely poem..
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