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~Choc, Choco, Chocolate~

!Choc Choco Chocolate!

Refreshing the emotions,
Enchanting sensations,
Charm of temptations,
Flavour in celebrations;

Eases the toughest day,
Keeps worries at bay,
Sweeps the tears away,
Causes delight to stay;

Charm of coffee, often cocoa,
Delight of temptational aroma,
Sweet ecstasy dipped in vanilla,
Choc, Choco, Chocolate, euphoria.

*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}

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  • TransparentOpacity
    October 28, 2008
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    YUMMY

    well I could never imagine myself o anyone writing a poem on chocolate .... but you have proved me wrong .... WOW I simply loved it !!!


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 29, 2008
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    Delicious!!


  • Wind 03
    August 24, 2008
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    :)))

    very Sweeet poem...touching! well writtensuch a nice treat.


  • SabaSophiya
    August 17, 2008

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    Hello brother....Thats one of your "sweetest" poems I have ever come across! Keep enjoying the chocolate n stay sweet -tempered forever!!

    Best of both the worlds,
    Best Bajjo,


  • Nermin Nazim
    August 14, 2008

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    I need one coffee and a choco chocolate

    what is that sweet chocolaty wonderful sensations brother and a coffee with it too, my goodness what a delectable pleasure. sooooooooo sweet


    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      Its sweeter than the chocolate when i recieve such comments from you my dear sister. I love this comment, thanks indeed.


  • crimsondew
    August 14, 2008
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    Delicious!!!I am actually eating Galaxy while reading this..makes it just sweeter!


    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      You are so cute, the way you comment on my writes, i really like it. Thanks my dear sister.


  • KillerRain
    August 13, 2008
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    delicious. AWWWWWW! Now i'm hungry. lol. KillerRain


    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      Its a delight to have a comment from you my dear. Love you indeed, thanks for these wondeful words.


  • Riamh
    August 13, 2008
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    Ahhhh! a fellow-chocaholic!

    Lovely write, well done!


    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      Indeed a chocoholic and am glad to meet a fellow chocoholic on AP. Thanks for this comment.


  • poetrandy gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    Re: ~Choc, Choco, Chocolate~

    Gee what neat, ever so strong and true statements! I'm there, too! I'm a choca-halic. Can't give up the stuff. Been on a diet for three months and can't loose a pound, because of this stuff (ha, ha) -- I think you forgot that its supposed to be an aphrodisiac(though you do say "enchanting sensations!), as well! Great write. Love it!

    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      Its a wonderful moment to recieve such comment from you. It is really aphrodisiac with chocolate in ones mouth. Thanks for this comment, loved it sincerely.


  • The.Tango.Emily
    August 13, 2008
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    Yummy!
    Great write!
    Excellent imagery!


    • Aun Ali
      August 14, 2008
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      Thanks dear friend. I am glad you loved it.

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