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These are the things I love




Your touch, your kiss, your sweet embrace
the way you like to suck face

The way your fingers set my skin on fire
the way you stir my lusty desire

The way you kiss away my tears
and how you whisper in my ears

How you encourage me to be myself
especially since I'm no elf

When you reach across the bed at night
searching for your passions delight

How you love me
Like I love you

 

 

 

 

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place in your AN "Crossroads"


I don't know why this came out like this I don't usually rhyme my pieces.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading this poem. it rhymed nicely. its a very sensual piece.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Angelflower
    August 14, 2008

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    Lol. I love this!! It ryhmed so well!! and the fact that it's sensual rhyme is really great!It was so sweet too.. The ending just made me go. "aww" lol. bravo!! thanks much for sharing!! best of luck!!


    Angel