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Vivian Voliclare

I stood looking in the mirror. My reflection was blurry from the tears i had been crying. I looked away in shame and walked into my bathroom running a brush throgh my thick curly black hair. Why am I so misunderstood? I hadnt meant to kill the baby... it was crawling away from its den so I had simply tried to return it. I looked myself in the eyes staring blankly into my own bright yellow eyes. I was devastated.
  A few nights ago I had been prowling the streets in my wolf form when i saw a dog walking lost so i tried to pick it up by its scruff but i bit to hard. I panicked and tried to bury the body.
  A woman saw me burrying it and screamed running off into the night so now i was hiding in an abandoned home. Hiding from my own family.
  I decided to leave the house. Life was hard so i walked out silently and looked at the full moon.
  My bones cracked and i fell to my hands and knees and where i ounce was standing as a human i was now a wolf. I had white fur with black spots and a black ring around my right eye. I trotted down the street, leaving my clothes behind.
After walking about a mile i grew tired and heard a strange whimpering noise. Walking a bit farther into a dark, smelly alley, i found a box. A box full of little black balls of fur. wolf puppies!
  I couldnt just leave them there. so grabbing the box in my mouth i pulled and pulled. The box weighed a good 50 lbs. But I was strong and kept pulling. Pulling that box of pups all the way back to my house.
  I looked closely at the pups. 2 males and a female. I thoght silently of names. Alan...Cecilia...and William. I smiled to myself and nodded with pleasure then carefully tipping over the box the pups scrambled out and i lay down so they could nurse.

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A few weeks later a man came to my house. He knew what i was. It was my brother Lucas. He explained that the pups i had found and nursed...now my babies, were destined to grow up and save Transylvania from an evil pack of wolves whoes leaders name was Jalgar. I gasped slightly at the news and sat down to let it all sink in.
  My babies were heroes and I didnt even know it.
  And I realized, looking at my babies, Alan, Cecelia, and William that if that faithful night if I have not saved them then all of Transylvania would have no future. And I also realized that, if I hadnt have raised and saved them many innocent people would have died.
  I was a hero.


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Id like to dedicate this story to my dog Crystal Chandelier. On Friday, August 15th I have to get her put to sleep due to a brain tumor. RIP Crystal. See you at Rainbow Bridge someday.


^o.o^


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  • Enrinye
    June 22

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    Wow, this was just beautiful! I usually don't read stories but I couldn't resist this one and it is fantastic...

    ''A few nights ago I had been prowling the streets in my wolf form...''

    this line was simply amazing...the whole story was very mystical and poetic...

    good job!
    take care
    Suza


  • Dark Otter
    August 14, 2008

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    I like your story!

    To have the imagination of a child would truly be an asset. To create worlds inside our head and then get to play there is a part of my life that I miss. Your heroine has a good heart and a playful spirit. I suspect that she mirrors you. Keep writing, keep expressing yourself and the acknowledgement will come in time. May your grief be short so that you may once again move forward with your life. A good dog is a treasure that is difficult to lose.