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like being crushed by romance.

rays of light collide with my daydream--
my heart, my blood, my angel, my soul,
your voice sings me to health.

and my lovely world, every sense,
penetrated by your happy gaze--
as daggers too often are--

[spare me one foolish chance--
or as they say in france--
mai j'ai cette danse?]

this song brings tears--
my arms and the breeze
and the space between our lips.

and pulling my hair and screaming--
exhaling in the violent fashion
of our passionate flame.

"all the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players..."

yet we have each other,
and the sweet winds of love
to eclipse our rationality.

i love you like you are loved by beauty.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    Ah..one can do it..time and time again..and this is the charm of this love..I love the mannerism and the structure you made here..thanks for sharing...