The taste of your lips,
sends my taste buds into convulsionary euphoria,
igniting fireworks of passion,
causing sweat to glisten upon my venerable ness.
Nectar free flowing like a river running freely,
vastly exposed to the elements of desire.
Your hand gently positioned on my cheek,
as electrifying gaze hypnotizing my senses,
mesmerized in giant pools of emerald explosions.
Muscles taunt with anticipation, heightening as your
warm fingertips explore freely amidst my feminine treasures.
Sexually inhaling your scent, titillating
my inner most woman waiting for you to animalize me.
Author notes
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Crossroads
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult Semi - Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
1350 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I like that..
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WOW!!!! this is one very hot, sensual poem that has blown me away.. I love the third stanza, the second stanza and the first stanza the best.
so essentially I love the whole poem.
fantastic job with this poem and with the prompt
good luck
kat
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Your imagery is wonderfully done. I especially like the last stanza. Best of luck in the contest dear.
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Woah!!
This was penned with such passionate descriptions and imagery that linger long after being read. Your lanuage in this was very sensual & brilliant. You spoke volumes in brevity and pulled me in with your words making me want to read more.
Loved this line most
"Muscles taunt with anticipation, heightening as your
warm fingertips explore freely amidst my feminine treasures."
--that was hott!!
Breathless piece.. good luck in the contest!
I was gonna enter but not after reading this
mine won't hold a candle to it lol -
wow! sensual and very sexy, without being gross or crude. well done, i wish you the best of luck.
Abby.
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